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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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Sta.sh
There is one small detail that seems off in this page. In the first panel, the character on the bottom right. His body and proportions look stellar. Up until you reach his left forearm. You have some perfect foreshadowing on his upper arm, seeing how that's coming at the viewer, but then the forearm's proportions look too small since with your foreshadowing should be closer to the viewer. It just gives the feel that he's a big muscular guy with scrawny forearms.
Just my observation. I draw in a more manga style. Either way the work is beautiful. I personally struggle, for some bloody reason, with male back muscles. Making them look strong without appearing like a steroid freak.
Thanks!